I really like the idea of your video and I think you did a really great job with the choices you made and the sequences you did with the clothes and the shoes. One suggestion would be to fix the few photos you have that are blurry. Other than that I think you have a cool concept!
Dana, I really enjoyed watching this! I especially liked the visual elements of the various clothes and the different shoes. Your animation displays a great sense of individuality and creativity! Your animation definitely conveys a transition of time (ex. morning routine and deciding what to wear). I think the most creative aspect of your video is when the person you are taking pictures of is trying to figure out what to wear for that day. Maybe you could continue the animation, with her leaving her dorm room by having her open the door/etc...??? I don't really have any other suggestions for you because I loved your concept and you did a really nice job. Your animation had a very nice flow to it and your concept was very clear.
Wow that girl has a lot of clothes. The video was very fun to watch. the mixing and matching was interesting. I feel like it was something that you could see in a commercial. I think the continuity was good until the ending. If there was a bit more closure, it'd feel like a complete sequence. Otherwise, it was enjoyable and seemed well done.
Dana! This video really made me think about the relationship between what people like to wear, and what that clothing says about them. I really liked how the blanket slowly pulled off of the girl and seemed to have a mind of its own. I also really liked the timing with the shoes. The speed seemed perfect. The way you played with time was great in terms of condensing how long it actually takes to pick out an outfit into a few seconds. It would be cool to see more added to the end. As for other suggestions, maybe just use a tripod next time you do something like the clothing part so that the screen does not move because this can feel somewhat distracting. Overall, I really liked the video and It is clear that you worked hard to create a story through different angles and scenes.
I really like the idea of your video and I think you did a really great job with the choices you made and the sequences you did with the clothes and the shoes. One suggestion would be to fix the few photos you have that are blurry. Other than that I think you have a cool concept!
ReplyDeleteDana, I really enjoyed watching this! I especially liked the visual elements of the various clothes and the different shoes. Your animation displays a great sense of individuality and creativity! Your animation definitely conveys a transition of time (ex. morning routine and deciding what to wear). I think the most creative aspect of your video is when the person you are taking pictures of is trying to figure out what to wear for that day. Maybe you could continue the animation, with her leaving her dorm room by having her open the door/etc...??? I don't really have any other suggestions for you because I loved your concept and you did a really nice job. Your animation had a very nice flow to it and your concept was very clear.
ReplyDeleteWow that girl has a lot of clothes. The video was very fun to watch. the mixing and matching was interesting. I feel like it was something that you could see in a commercial. I think the continuity was good until the ending. If there was a bit more closure, it'd feel like a complete sequence. Otherwise, it was enjoyable and seemed well done.
ReplyDeleteDana! This video really made me think about the relationship between what people like to wear, and what that clothing says about them. I really liked how the blanket slowly pulled off of the girl and seemed to have a mind of its own. I also really liked the timing with the shoes. The speed seemed perfect. The way you played with time was great in terms of condensing how long it actually takes to pick out an outfit into a few seconds. It would be cool to see more added to the end. As for other suggestions, maybe just use a tripod next time you do something like the clothing part so that the screen does not move because this can feel somewhat distracting. Overall, I really liked the video and It is clear that you worked hard to create a story through different angles and scenes.
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