Julian, very nice job transitioning into each new frame. We liked your sketches and the realism. Maybe he could include the cork-board to make the video continue since it is included in the frame.
We thought that you both did a really cool job with your "Graveyard" animation! Great concept and very creative with the window scenes. We liked that you were able to transform a graveyard into something more artsy and lively! :)
We really thought your imaging and concept were fantastic. The pencil worked well with the lighting and the cork board. We liked how it was clear that it was a piece of paper on a cork board. The transitions came out very smooth. It would be cool to have some enlarged shots of the characters face or hands to emphasize the point you are trying to make.
The colors in the second video were really great. We thought the progression of the story was a tad unclear. You could possibly add some unexpected elements in order to help the viewer understand what you were trying to accomplish.
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ReplyDeleteJulian, very nice job transitioning into each new frame. We liked your sketches and the realism. Maybe he could include the cork-board to make the video continue since it is included in the frame.
We thought that you both did a really cool job with your "Graveyard" animation! Great concept and very creative with the window scenes. We liked that you were able to transform a graveyard into something more artsy and lively! :)
We really thought your imaging and concept were fantastic. The pencil worked well with the lighting and the cork board. We liked how it was clear that it was a piece of paper on a cork board. The transitions came out very smooth. It would be cool to have some enlarged shots of the characters face or hands to emphasize the point you are trying to make.
ReplyDeleteThe colors in the second video were really great. We thought the progression of the story was a tad unclear. You could possibly add some unexpected elements in order to help the viewer understand what you were trying to accomplish.