Concept/Idea: A fun concept using a hair ribbon. Visual/Aesthetic: Energetic. Interesting movement with the bow. Organization: You can tell that time is moving forward because the ribbon is moving through the hair. Complexity: Could be a little more complex with more crazy movements with the ribbon. Making your video longer and with more visual layer would make a more interesting film. Creativity: The unnatural movement of the ribben is the most creative aspect.
Idea/Concept: Loved the ribbon moving around on the head. maybe have it move to the other side of the head as well. Visual: like how there are two different views. Time: the time and length is good, but if you wanted to make it longer maybe have the ribbon go in reverse and then move to the other side or put the hair up into different hair styles.
Concept/Idea: A fun concept using a hair ribbon.
ReplyDeleteVisual/Aesthetic: Energetic. Interesting movement with the bow.
Organization: You can tell that time is moving forward because the ribbon is moving through the hair.
Complexity: Could be a little more complex with more crazy movements with the ribbon. Making your video longer and with more visual layer would make a more interesting film.
Creativity: The unnatural movement of the ribben is the most creative aspect.
Idea/Concept: Loved the ribbon moving around on the head. maybe have it move to the other side of the head as well.
ReplyDeleteVisual: like how there are two different views.
Time: the time and length is good, but if you wanted to make it longer maybe have the ribbon go in reverse and then move to the other side or put the hair up into different hair styles.